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近五年安徽中考真题英语书面表达

作者:皖智研究院  时间:2022/4/18 10:39:54  点击量:663

2017年



假如你是李华,你们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园”展演活动,你打算邀请你的美国朋友Mike参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。

 

1.时间:7月1日下午2点;2.地点:学校操场;3.内容:文化展览、节目表演等。提示词:戏曲opera  n.  表演performance  n.
注意:1.词数80~100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

 

Dear Mike,I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua
【范文】Dear Mike,I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture.Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There is an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1. It will be held on the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, a culture show and many wonderful opera performances will be put on. It's a chance for you to learn more about Chinese traditional culture. Come and join us! I think we'll have a great time.I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua 

【解析】本篇习作成功地完成了写作任务,表达顺畅,结构连贯,字数符合要求。准确运用时态,要点全面,语法正确,上下文意思连贯,适当发挥了想象。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动,例如to share with you,on the playground,be put on,Come and join us,have a great time,look forward to等。特别是运用了there be结构,例如There is an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1.;以及形式主语句式的运用,It's a chance for you to learn more about Chinese traditional culture.更是本文的亮点,是一篇非常棒的邀请函。

2018年



某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇题为“Thank you, my teacher!”的短文参加此次活动。

 

要点如下:1.严格要求;2.耐心指导;3.热情鼓励;……

 

注意:1. 词数80~ 100 ;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Thank you, my teacher!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

 

【范文】Thank you, my teacher!I’d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Li, because she's helped me a lot.Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I’ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.

 

【解析】这是一篇要求感谢自己老师的文章。动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一,三人称,一般过去时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。 

2019年



假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安,请你用英文给他写封电子邮件,谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。

 

要点如下:1.经常做户外活动;2.很少用电子产品;3.坚持做眼保健操;4. ......

 

注意:1.词数80-100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

 

Dear MikeI'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua

 

【范文】Dear MikeI’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.Yours,Li Hua

 

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份,给自己的英国笔友Mike写信,给他介绍一下你在保护视力方面的做法。审题可知,这篇短文应使用一般现在时,第一人称来叙述,内容应包括:首先讲述题目中Mike的视力减退问题,并引出文章的主题;然后具体介绍自己在保护视力方面的做法,这一部分是文章的主体,可以按照题目中所列的内容进行介绍,并对第四条进行补充;最后提出自己的希望或祝愿。写作时应注意:短文按内容表达的需要,分成三段,每一段一个主题;内容应包括题目中的所有要点,不能遗漏;可根据表达需要,增加细节内容,使文章更加充实、丰富。其次应注意文章的表达,不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译,句式应符合英语的表达习惯。句子结构应完整,可以简单句结构为基础,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构的使用,提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的衔接成分,使行文连贯,表达流畅。  

2020年



假定你是李华。某英文报“My Hometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者,请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下:1.熟悉家乡;2.乐于交流;3.擅长英语。

 

注意:1.词数80-100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;4.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

 

参考词汇: journalist (n.记者);column (n.专栏)

 

Dear Sir/Madam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua

 

【范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I hear your newspaper needs journalists for the column My Hometown. I hope to be a member of the team.First, I know a lot about my hometown, such as its history and culture. Besides, I used to work as a journalist for my school newspaper and I did a very good job. I'm easy-going and always ready to communicate with others. Moreover, I have a good knowledge of English, and I'm skillful at expressing myself clearly in English.I'm sure to be the right person you are looking for. I'd be thankful if I could get this chance.Yours,Li Hua

 

【解析】1. 题干解读:本题属于书信作文,信件的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据提示要点写一封自荐信介绍自己并申请成为小记者。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。

 

2. 例文点评:这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求,先表达写信目的,然后根据要点提示介绍自己,最后再次点明确信自己是最合适的人。例文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。

 

3. 高分亮点:(1)单词和短语:hope to do sth.;a member of;such as;besides;used to do sth.;work as;do a very good job;be ready to do sth.;communicate with;moreover;have a good knowledge of;be skillful at;in English;look for。(2)句型:and连接并列句;省略that的定语从句;if引导的条件状语从句。 

2021年



假定你是李华,曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。

 

内容包括:1.事情经过;2.个人感悟。

 

注意:1.词数80~100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;4.短文题目已给出,不计入总词数。

 

参考词汇:pocket money (n.零花钱); meaningful (adj.有意义的)

 

Once I Was Praised____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

 

【范文】Once I Was PraisedOnce I was praised because I did something meaningful with my pocket money.One day, I happened to know some students in a school were hungry for knowledge but they didn’t have enough books. I decided to offer my help. With all the pocket money I saved, I bought some books online, and gave them away to the school. My parents were very happy and praised me when they heard about it. They said I did a meaningful thing.I believe that every little bit helps. I will continue to do what I can to help others.

 

【解析】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Once I Was Praised”为题,结合提示进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。

 

2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来行文,时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍事情经过;第三段描述个人感悟。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。

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